Week 7 Microfiction: Champagne
Target (Source: Wikimedia Commons)
Author’s note: This is a little story that happened just after a story of mine. As I said in the Author’s note there, I was inspired by Charlie’s Angels.
Aftermath
I sat on my dark blue sofa, sipping
my Champagne. Well, it is good but oysters and a dish of smoked salmon may be
missing though; what a shame. But well, I guess it’s better than nothing.
« As I told you earlier, the
CFO of Mahabharata Holdings died in a car accident because of a heart attack. The accident caused injuries but nothing serious for the vict… » The news
anchor continued the story of the accident.
Oh god, I feel bad for the victims.
I’m so sorry about it but at least it was just minor injuries.
Next target
So, who is my next target?
Melanie, this was a very interesting micro-story! I clicked the link to read the full story that took place before this and I was amazed. The style you told the story in was fantastic, I really like the attitude you wrote the story in. It was such a unique take on the Mahabharata, and I found it extremely refreshing. I have no real suggestions or anything to change, I was just very enamored by everything you did to make the story what it is.
ReplyDeleteHey Melanie,
ReplyDeleteThis micro-story is super interesting! I was a little confused at first, until I read the story that you had linked. I thought that the way you told the story was very creative and the way it tied into the Mahabharata was awesome! Like the above comment I don't think there is anything really to change about this story. Great work!